Euphoria eloped on Dainty Partridges...
Streaming Elysian Pathways...
Lured by her vagabond Jazz...
Held in arms..
Of the Intoxicating Macrocosm..
Which lay in her eyes..
Evoking Obscure Sorcery..
Through an Affable Smile...
Where the Desecrated leaf of Monsoon...
Was Ashened with a joyless momentum...
A pouting heart...
Lurking underneath...
..that Snow White veil..
That strange key-less laugh,
Pining for Redemption;
Yearning for love;
Unfelt yet so coveted;
...untouched yet so desired;
On her quest...
For the peace she held..
In the Corona of an embrace...
And the Aurora of a gaze...
Where she'll wake up...
In the Crafted orchard ..
....of an everlasting Daybreak...
Contained; Discovered;
In a bitter-sweet eulogy..
~
Love,
Raikamal
[P.S. ~ The key-lessness has been borrowed from Bhutu :)]
5 comments:
nice one :):)
I liked the lines
'That strange key - less laugh,
Pining for Redemption ;
Yearning for love;
Unfelt yet so coveted '
Do chk out my new poem 'The Evening'
I would be waiting for oyur comments :)
Sourik
This paints a picture....a truly golden imagery.And I loved the depth in this one....good job!I've added u on my sidebar.
I actually wanted to mean that I've added u on my blog list of friends on the sidebar.It's in the alphabetical order;hope u've seen ur blog there alongwith my other friends' blogs.It's under the title Poet Pals;chk it out on my blog if u haven't seen.U can also add ur favourite list of blogs on ur blog list simply by giving the respective URLs.
And I amn't that much into technologies either,so no problems.Just leave a comment on my blog if u can't add on ur blog list and I'll detail u on the procedure.Anyway,thanks 4 dropping by my blog;hope u liked the new decorations.
Deeptesh
Beautiful Poem.
"Streaming Elysian Pathways...
Lured by her vagabond Jazz..."
Awesome.
I don't delete comments ; I love keeping them.I don't 2 how 2 delete comments 2b honest.Hope u found ur blog on the sidebar.I'll appear for ISC next month;though I am in the science stream,I will do English honors.And I did c on ur profile that u do script-writing;I love doing it too.I did all the scripts for my school and even won the best script award at Statesman Vibes Festival.Thanks 4 dropping by my blog once again...what do u study?I'll blog my next poem on V-Day shortly,do chk it out.N u can also mail me if u like on the gmail address on my sidebar written in a blue paragraph.
Have a nice day.:-) ) )
Cheers,
Deeptesh
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