Thursday, April 9, 2009

Ode to Freudian Complexes..

Plucking out fantasies,
From the whorls of phantasmal delight,
She cremated,
Words and syllables of affliction,
With lurid lullabies
Of Imagination..

Figurines of fervent love,
Burnt in terse absurdness,
Of Mirth and Misgivings,
Swerved an old house,
To form softened scars..
In a whirlpool of Maim.

Holding tender shards,
Of trembling dunes..
And lofty breeze,
She emerged out,
Sprinkling droplets of Blankness;
And Indifference;
Shielding jaded beams,
On a Supine dawn..

4 comments:

sourik_poetsparadise said...

haan board exams sesh...pre-medical xam dilam...ebar wbjee baki achhe...after that 3-te law exam...porashunor haath theke r nistar nei...tomar kobita e ekta comment korbo as soon as i am over with my exams...ekhon ektu tension e achhi...thanks a lot for your precious comments on my poem...etodin kothay disappear kore gechhile...i think you are writing a lot these days...

Sourik

Deeptesh said...

Dreamy and forlorn.Your diction is always a bit surreal,lyrical and voodoo.And the imagery with which you end this keeps the reader yearning for more.What happened next.........damn, you know how to keep the reader guessing!

Inam said...

Oh well, the "supine dawn" quite took my breath away, amazing :)

sourik_poetsparadise said...

Eureka!!! This one simply left me spellbound...
btw, amar taraf theke ekta dukher khobor achhe...pre medical test e qualify korte parini...khub kharap lagchhe...wbjee diyechi..keeping my fingers crossed..hope i get thru medical...
ekta natun kobita upload korechhi...tomar comment er opekkha e roilam...i would be waiting for your precious comments...

Wishing you good luck!!!
Sourik