Sunday, June 21, 2009

Midnight hues..

Every tender prism ..
Held in a droplet..
Swept in the fallen days...
Of fleeting sunflowers..
While there seemed diamonds everywhere...
Some strewn..
Some adorned...
Tumbling the torn corners...
Lighting up carmine percussion...
Streaming a maiden cruise..
Sliding into an Iris,
In a season of dreams...

This one's for Lorenzo..


2 comments:

sourik_poetsparadise said...

'While there seemed diamonds everywhere...
Some strewn..
Some adorned...
Tumbling the torn corners...
Lighting up carmine percussion'

my favourite lines from this one.

Hello Rye,
Long time before i could actually find sometime to visit your blog. Ami law te peye gechi...cnlu. kin2 jachi na..instead i am going for economics honours. Bhishon byasto chilam college admissions niye. Finally, kolkata chhartei holo. oi jonno tomar saathe contact korte parini. Kobita-ta khub bhalo laglo. Actually, your strong control over words and on a much broader aspect, over english language always fascinates me. Tumi kemon achho janiyo...and also let me know if you are in facebook or orkut...:) :)

Cheers!
Sourik

deepteshpoetry said...

Nice wordplays.I got thru' in d JU exams for Eng.I came 3rd.I'm staying over there.Do chk d one out on my blog!Hope u hvn't forgotten me!I had 2 leave for a while due 2 academic reasons.